Sunday, 30 August 2015

Trade Fair/Market coming Up

Walt: use language that paints a picture in the mind of our reader

This term’s topic it is called Trade and Enterprise. Trade and Enterprise is about trading products and selling products to people introducing what you are doing and presenting. In our classes team 4 has been splitted into 6 little groups and we earn money called PTs also we have our own Bank Accounts but different to adults.

The whole point of this was to gain more interest. The meaning of that is to get more customers than everyone else. At trade fair everyone was hustling people to come and buy their things. In my group it was me, Rima, Danielle, Hethet we made 21 orders. Trade fair is a fair when bunch of students (people) presenting and introducing their products to people, showing what work they have been doing and working on from the past few weeks. I had lots of fun presenting my groups product.

A part of Trade Fair was our groups there is Home Ware, Custom Stationery, Toys, Jewelry and Accessories, Music and finaly Kitchen. I’m in Miss Lavakula’s group. In our group we sell homeware products. Like soaps, candles, carved soaps, carved candles, making air fresheners and other cool products that we have made. We had to split into little groups so that we can figure out what product we are making. In our little group there is Danielle Rima Htett Htett and Christian. In my little group we are making orange and skull candles.

My experience at the trade fair was really fun and cool looking at other students products. But some of them were are little bit boring but it was still cool looking at them. I ordered maybe lots of products. I ordered some custom bookmarks, made instruments, and loom bands. What I love was the other products but I didn’t by them because it cost a lot of money.

It was a lot of fun hustling to people and getting them interested into our products. There is a market coming up on week 8 so we got our orders and counted them to see how many we got. It was a lot of orders, so we had to make their candles ready to sell at week 8.

For this task we had to write a recount about our past trade fair. We had to use language that paints a picture in the mind our reader. We also had to add specific vocab into our writing.     

Saturday, 29 August 2015

Really Good Combination

Walt: use language that paints a picture in the mind of our reader

If my friend will let me have a Cadbury Jaffas Chocolate. It should me the number chocolate I have ever had.

Cadbury Jaffas Chocolate is very delicate and yum to eat for dessert. It contains jaffas inside the chocolate and little wierd green shapes. The Cadbury Chocolate brand is $3.40 for small and $3.50 for the large ones.

When I first tasted the Jaffas Chocolate, it crunches in my mouth like no other chocolate. The chocolate jaffas looked like m&m's when I saw it inside the chocolate. Its chocolatey texture just melted into my mouth. Also the orange chips that was inside the chocolate. I tasted like chocolate orange flakes sprinkling into my mouth observing all its flavour in my mouth. Jafass chocolate just shines through the sun just wanting me to eat it everyday.

I would improve my product about nothing, because lots of people likes Jaffas Chocolate. I would recommend by putting M&Ms inside the chocolate and also some more orange chips inside the chocolate. Jaffas chocolate is a number one chocolate I have ever tasted.

I would recommend this Jaffas product a 5/10. The reason why I did 5 out of ten its because it is a bit sweet to me but now it is yumm.

My literacy class and I did a chocolate taste test. Our teacher Mr Goodwin went to the supermarket and bought some different kinds of chocolate. He took off the wraps around them so that we don't know what chocolate it was.

He gave us numbers on a piece of paper. The chocolate was splitted into little containers. When we eat the chocolate it changes your brain what your eating because we already knew what chocolate we were eating. That what happens, it changes the way our brains look like.


Advice Teller for James Abel

Walt: think critically about what we read ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------


In this task I have learned that when I am writing advice to someone I must think critically and write critically. I have been thinking critically to what advice I am giving to people like a man called James Abel. He has been told that it was the place to give advice to.

James told me that a buddy of his had suggested that he should by a fitness watch for him. He didn't know exactly what they are for and what they do. He went to check out at this store and this nice lady appears at the shop and recommended either the Fitbit Charge or the Garmin Vivo Fit. Please leave a comment below if you like it.   

Applying for a Job

Walt: write an application for a job
For my job I will be applying to do dish-washing. If I finish this job very quickly I can do maybe 4 to 5 dishes a day. I would be very careful with the plates and cups, and to not make noises with them.

I wanted to be a dishwasher monitor because I have been washing dishes at home. This job application is the best job for me because I love to wash dishes during the weekend. The reason why I wanted this job application so so so badly because I want more Pts so that I can have more money on my bank account. This is the job that I would like to have because I have the best skills. I'm am going to apply to this job.

Thank you to people and for your time who are reading my application about a dishwasher person

Letter Of Reference

To Whom
I was just telling you that Loseli is really good at doing dish-washing, she has did many times at home. My daughter Loseli is a trustworthy person to trust. I believe that Loseli has the right personality for working with people. Loseli can take care of others and honestly she is a good person to hire this job.

Hello and this is my job application writing. I wanted to apply for a job so that I can get more money. I am very good at washing the dishes and putting them away fast. We learnt to write from a different mind of a viewer. Also we had to write our capabilities of the job we had applied to.


Wednesday, 19 August 2015

Properties of 3D Shapes

WALT: We are learning about the properties of 3D dimensional shapes

From the past few weeks we have been learning and working about Properties of 3D Dimensional Shapes. We have been working on the parts of the shapes. The parts are the faces, Vertices (Vortex) and the Edges. There are 3D shapes called tetrahedron, Pyramid and a Cuboid. I hope you enjoy my presentation.

Auxiliary Verbs

WALT: We are learning about Auxiliary verbs and using them in sentences

This is my Auxiliary verbs. The Auxiliary are am, will, was, have. These are also called helping words.
Our task was to choose a verb (action verb) and we had to find an appropriate picture for our presentation.  

Monday, 10 August 2015

Ski Trip Fundraise

Walt: understand and use new vocabulary

We are learning to understand and use new vocabulary. My group and I were doing a poster about skiing and fundraising. Our task was to create a poster about skiing and also talking about our service. My service was gardening and planting flowers. My service involved planting gardens as quick as I can but neatly.

Thursday, 6 August 2015

Learning About Decimals

Walt: Use strategies we already know to solve decimal points

I solved the question out by using the shapes tool to make to apartments. Then what I did, I add the tens and ones. So 5+2=7. 2+1=3, then add the 3 and 7. That makes 3.7. For this problem solving we had to use strategies that we already know to solve this equation. 

Wednesday, 5 August 2015


Walt: We are learning about conjuctions and how to use them in sentences

  • We went home and went straight to bed.
  • They are rich but they aren’t happy.

  • We went home because we were tired.

  • We went home early, so we missed the end of the concert.

  • We went home when Jane wanted to.

We went home before the concert ended.

  • We went home after Max Jones had sung his first song.

  • We went home although / though we did not really want to.

We will go home if we are tired.

Gene can go to school because he loves to learn

Lena has a sore foot after jumping on the trampoline

Katareina won't be going to the movies unless she has a adult with her

Sione can ride his bike but he has to have permission from his mum

Sally climbed a tree although she didn't want to

Kyle walked home from school since he was little

Simon was full from dinner even though he ate a little bit

Anna watched her sister incase she might be missing

Scott was in charge when his mum and dad went out

Shelley played ripper rugby only if she is allowed to

We are learning about conjuctions and how to use then in sentences. It came up with lots of sentences. So we had to highlight the conjuction words betwwen the sentences.

Monday, 3 August 2015

Whole Day

Walt: persuade the reader to agree with our message

Bean bags are as much spongy and delicate to sit on.

During class time the soft and smooth bean bags are available for hire to sit on. Instead of sitting on the hard wooden concrete floor or on a bendable molded chair, you will be able to sit on the nice comfy bean bag to do your work.

The spongy and delicate bean bags are filled with soft rubbery beans (not baked beans)  and covered in a rubbery skin texture. They can be moulded into any shape of your choice. You can choose to sit on the fluffy bean bag, or use it to lean back on.

The comfortable bean bags come in two different colours. A blue colour like the colour of the    bright bluey ocean, and a bright lime mint green. It’s your choice which one you want to sit on.

The price is 3pt. You pay once at the starting point of the day and after that you can use the comfy beanbag for the rest of the  day.

Remember this. For 3pt you can sit at a beanbag during class time all day long.

We were asked to re craft our ad so that people can agree to our message. I used thesaurus to get more exciting words then sad and boring words. We persuaded a reader to hire a bean bag.