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Do you know how to swim? Learning how to swim is important because children can’t swim. Lots of people and kids drown accidentally, thats why we have swimming pools to teach them.
One of the reasons why swimming is important because New Zealand has one of the worst drowning rates in the world.Twenty five percent of children age 0-10 don’t know how to swim because they don’t go to the swimming pools.
New Zealand is a small country.New Zealand is surrounded by beaches,swimming pools,rivers.streams,lakes.During summers families sometimes hang around the swimming pools or at the beaches when they are very hot.
Learning how to swim is important in New Zealand. Children don’t know how to swim because they never been to the swimming pools long time ago.If they are at the swimming pools and they don’t know how to swim they must go to an instructor to teach them how to swim properly.