Structure Poems

Walt: write a poem using nouns, verbs and adjectives

Rugby

muddy, sloppy

sprinting, angry, competing

strong

On September the 8th my literacy and I were working on structure poems. We had to use nouns, verbs and also adjectives.  

Adjective, Noun, Verb, Adverb

Walt: find meanings about adjectives, nouns, verbs and adverbs

Delightful    Adjectives

Dogs          Noun

Dry              Verb

Dangerously     Adverb

Lazy         Adjectives

Lambs         Noun

Litter          Verb

laughtfully      Adverb

Adventurous Adverbs

WALT: We are learning about adverbs and how to use them effectively

I have learned about Adverbs changing or describing verbs. Many adverbs ends in -ly. There was a example that can help us with out adventurous adverbs.

Poem

Walt: use our inferencing skills to find meaning in the text

At sun down,

I see my , small and frail.

It likes to warm by the fire and play with balls of yarn.

she sits there all day knitting but she stops to get some fresh cookies out of the oven.

she sits down with her cookies fresh from the oven, knitting and eating it at the same time.

Trade Fair/Market coming Up

Walt: use language that paints a picture in the mind of our reader

This term’s topic it is called Trade and Enterprise. Trade and Enterprise is about trading products and selling products to people introducing what you are doing and presenting. In our classes team 4 has been splitted into 6 little groups and we earn money called PTs also we have our own Bank Accounts but different to adults.

The whole point of this was to gain more interest. The meaning of that is to get more customers than everyone else. At trade fair everyone was hustling people to come and buy their things. In my group it was me, Rima, Danielle, Hethet we made 21 orders. Trade fair is a fair when bunch of students (people) presenting and introducing their products to people, showing what work they have been doing and working on from the past few weeks. I had lots of fun presenting my groups product.

A part of Trade Fair was our groups there is Home Ware, Custom Stationery, Toys, Jewelry and Accessories, Music and finaly Kitchen. I’m in Miss Lavakula’s group. In our group we sell homeware products. Like soaps, candles, carved soaps, carved candles, making air fresheners and other cool products that we have made. We had to split into little groups so that we can figure out what product we are making. In our little group there is Danielle Rima Htett Htett and Christian. In my little group we are making orange and skull candles.

My experience at the trade fair was really fun and cool looking at other students products. But some of them were are little bit boring but it was still cool looking at them. I ordered maybe lots of products. I ordered some custom bookmarks, made instruments, and loom bands. What I love was the other products but I didn’t by them because it cost a lot of money.

It was a lot of fun hustling to people and getting them interested into our products. There is a market coming up on week 8 so we got our orders and counted them to see how many we got. It was a lot of orders, so we had to make their candles ready to sell at week 8.

For this task we had to write a recount about our past trade fair. We had to use language that paints a picture in the mind our reader. We also had to add specific vocab into our writing.     

Really Good Combination

Walt: use language that paints a picture in the mind of our reader
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If my friend will let me have a Cadbury Jaffas Chocolate. It should me the number chocolate I have ever had.

Cadbury Jaffas Chocolate is very delicate and yum to eat for dessert. It contains jaffas inside the chocolate and little wierd green shapes. The Cadbury Chocolate brand is $3.40 for small and $3.50 for the large ones.

When I first tasted the Jaffas Chocolate, it crunches in my mouth like no other chocolate. The chocolate jaffas looked like m&m's when I saw it inside the chocolate. Its chocolatey texture just melted into my mouth. Also the orange chips that was inside the chocolate. I tasted like chocolate orange flakes sprinkling into my mouth observing all its flavour in my mouth. Jafass chocolate just shines through the sun just wanting me to eat it everyday.

I would improve my product about nothing, because lots of people likes Jaffas Chocolate. I would recommend by putting M&Ms inside the chocolate and also some more orange chips inside the chocolate. Jaffas chocolate is a number one chocolate I have ever tasted.

I would recommend this Jaffas product a 5/10. The reason why I did 5 out of ten its because it is a bit sweet to me but now it is yumm.

My literacy class and I did a chocolate taste test. Our teacher Mr Goodwin went to the supermarket and bought some different kinds of chocolate. He took off the wraps around them so that we don't know what chocolate it was.

He gave us numbers on a piece of paper. The chocolate was splitted into little containers. When we eat the chocolate it changes your brain what your eating because we already knew what chocolate we were eating. That what happens, it changes the way our brains look like.

     

Advice Teller for James Abel

Walt: think critically about what we read ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

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In this task I have learned that when I am writing advice to someone I must think critically and write critically. I have been thinking critically to what advice I am giving to people like a man called James Abel. He has been told that it was the place to give advice to.

James told me that a buddy of his had suggested that he should by a fitness watch for him. He didn't know exactly what they are for and what they do. He went to check out at this store and this nice lady appears at the shop and recommended either the Fitbit Charge or the Garmin Vivo Fit. Please leave a comment below if you like it.